I went on stage,
to perform the greatest illusion.
I went on stage,
but I was in a mental confusion.
I turned diamonds into dust,
I turned my breath into fire.
Made my audience dazzled,
and made the crowds thunder.
I cut my skin,
and made the wounds disappear.
I lied to my kin,
and yet I, they endear.
I went on stage,
to perform the greatest trick.
I went on stage,
and hid the greatest lunatic.
Everyone cheered and clapped,
awaiting the final act.
Fooled them all,
with a simple card trick.
No one had seen the sadness
behind the jesters smile
No one had seen the madness,
behind the jesters versatility.
I went on stage,
to perform the greatest illusion.
I went on stage,
but I was in a mental confusion.
Ended with a smile,
my little show for fools.
(Written at the age of 14)
-Z
Brilliant!
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Great writing 😊
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Thank you so much! ☺️
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Thanks Ms.X 😊
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U r welcome miss!
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❤️
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Great work!
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Thank you Tiara!! 😊
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You welcome. Keep it up!
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😊❤️
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Such matured vision by a 14 year… applause
Keep it up
All the best for future work..
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Thank you Bhaiya for your kind words and support. 😊
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Really awesome..keep it up baby ❤️
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Thanks Manu 😍
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i went on to read the poem with confusion
but guess what this poetry deserves applause and admiration !!
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Thank you so much for taking your time out and checking out my poem. Have a great day! ❤️
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Great piece
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this is wonderful! very good job!
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